a little lich lord help

[bossman001412]

When reborn came out I wanted to build this deck but it did not come out the right way. Some ideas please??

LANDS 24
10 islands
10 swamps
4 savage lands

CREATURES 28
3 lich lord of unx
3 jhessian zombies
3 grixix slavedriver
3 tidehollow strix
4 fatestitcher
4 death baron
4 vedalken ghoul
4 grixis grimblade

SPELLS 12
4 soul manipulation
1 mind funeral
4 cancel
3 dream fracture

type 2 please

and the reason why 1 mind funeral is the rest are in the sideboard

[bossman001412]

I modified my deck but it did not come out very well. So can someone help me get it going a little better please?????:confused:
type 2 block.

[bossman001412]

don't worry about it I tore the deck apart.