Can I win one Match!!!

[mikkozak]

I built this after Reborn came out and so far am getting stomped at FNM. I could use some suggestions.

Memory Sluice x4
Drowner Initiate x3
Cathartic Adept x2
Path to Exile x4
Twincast x2
Grimoire Theif x2
Tidehollow Strix x2
Cancel x3
Wall of Denial x4
Mind Funeral x4
Fieldmist Borderpost x2
Esper Charm x2
Sanity Grinding x2
Liliana Vess x1
Nemesis of Reason x2
Broken Ambitions x1

Swamp x2
Plains x2
Island x5
Arcane Sanctum x4
Esper Panorama x3
Crumbling Necropolis x1
Secluded Glen x1
Sunken Ruins x1
Faerie Conclave x1

[logicalnoise]

it'd help to know if anything is getting countered regularly or what type of decks you're battling but right now I'd say drop any non-required special lands and replace them with standard mana, and add some more creatures maybe some black spells to add aggresiveness to your deck. Prescilent kathari's could be powerful with wall of denials.

[mikkozak]

Naturally they counter Mind Funeral, and Nemesis of Reason. I have a decent amount of Multi-colored cards, so I need the Non-basic lands.

[logicalnoise]

so what colors is your deck? if you have stuff going for all 5 colors you need to think baout cheap mana spells with extra benefits like borderposts or trace fo abundance. Mind funerals and such are good cripple spells but they don't mean much if you can't hurt your opponent.
anyways what's the general strategy of your deck. I mean it's ok to have a slop deck with your favorite cards but if you use too many colors than your deck's strength will be all out of whack. I can't look up every card at work but the oens I reckonize are more for defense or countering. establish a way to deal damage without relying on specialized cards and you'll start seeing progress. throw in a couple haste creatures maybe allow for some enchantments that wil boost them but be cheap enough were your opponent may counter those instead of your good spells.