Whenever another creature is put into a graveyard from play... Deck

[WouldYouKindly17]

Don't know if this deck would work against anyone besides my friends, but it seems to. Its a benefits from multiplayer, but is pretty competitive 1 on 1.

Any thoughts? Tips? Criticisms?

http://www.mtgvault.com/ViewDeck.aspx?DeckID=20930

[bossman001412]

blood Cultist will work if you add quietus spike, because the quietus spike will give blood cultist deathtouch. do that to keep creatures off the field of play when thay come into play. or just take out there last creature and attack and take a little life and half after combat damage is dealt.

[xDuckee]

I've built this kind of deck, and unless any of your friends have an esper artifice deck w/salvage slasher and/or Nim Lasher I would add 2 mind funeral in place of the slivers. It would severely help out your purpose of building up that graveyard.